Wednesday, July 21, 2010

What is my poem about?

All right fellows what might you think this one is about?








WET PAVEMENT


The rain is pouring down onto a being so petite





She carries a purple bag and her heart in the other





Cliche yes but once again she cries





Door now locked she looks in the mirror





Soon she tells herself





Glancing out the window the world is smothered





For the rain has become a shower, Ironic she exclaims





Everytime despair overcomes you the world antagonizes





Anger is not what she feels, nor confusion





But the emotion is stupidity and an action to scream





Running out into the water she lets it hit her skin





It feels like rejoycement as she is drenched





No more she tells herself





Sitting down on wet pavement she laughs crazily





This is life she tells herself

What is my poem about?
I think it's about her being used to everything bad happening. Then finally accepting it.


I like it.


Nice work:)
Reply:might just be me but it sounds like heartache someone breaking your heart and you let them come back again and again and now your finally over it time to live life your way I think its reall good by the way good job
Reply:i think it must be about the opression of P.M.S.

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