All right fellows what might you think this one is about?
WET PAVEMENT
The rain is pouring down onto a being so petite
She carries a purple bag and her heart in the other
Cliche yes but once again she cries
Door now locked she looks in the mirror
Soon she tells herself
Glancing out the window the world is smothered
For the rain has become a shower, Ironic she exclaims
Everytime despair overcomes you the world antagonizes
Anger is not what she feels, nor confusion
But the emotion is stupidity and an action to scream
Running out into the water she lets it hit her skin
It feels like rejoycement as she is drenched
No more she tells herself
Sitting down on wet pavement she laughs crazily
This is life she tells herself
What is my poem about?
I think it's about her being used to everything bad happening. Then finally accepting it.
I like it.
Nice work:)
Reply:might just be me but it sounds like heartache someone breaking your heart and you let them come back again and again and now your finally over it time to live life your way I think its reall good by the way good job
Reply:i think it must be about the opression of P.M.S.
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