P0EM i WROTE, C0MMENTS PLE@SE!!!!!!?

PAST: as i have the cold blade on my wrist, i feel a chill go up my spine. tears stream out in droplets and land on my fingers, away i go carving into my skin, veins popping, wrists bleeding, pain bottled up, time to let it all go. screaming internally, terrified, dont want to go back, ever again. emotions run deep, things kept inside til death arrived. hidden away, darkness in the woods, another soul lost, another dream failed to come true, more hope, faith, and courage to be drained, along with the blood, that flows with the midnight rain.





PRESENT: newspaper headlines read "another died", an emo, broken like glass, never fixed. forever scarred, this poor girl, left without a chance. family cries, and bleeds inside. just like her...depression through the town, more and more teens going down. one by one, this fight has just begun. parents confused, worried, and afraid. never to let their children out in the rain...





FUTURE: All down. Nothing kept. Sadness gone, fright has left. No more souls, no more lives. No one cries, everyone has died. Suicide, most deadly thing. A lesson taught to all around, with all those dead bodies on the ground. Never cut, never lie, or you will end up without a life.

P0EM i WROTE, C0MMENTS PLE@SE!!!!!!?
aww honey, i will pray for you, i remember pain like that...
Reply:I'm sorry but I stopped at the third line. It's way too obscence!
Reply:ummm.... It's Emo....
Reply:the best I've ever read. get this published. I don't care who gave me a thumbs down. I like it and it should be published
Reply:its all about killing and being dead :-(
Reply:That was wonderful! I loved it! 20 on a scale of one to ten!!!!!!!!!


the end is the best- ur totally right, cutting kills!
Reply:Wow! Awesome poem. Keep writing.
Reply:Call a suicide hotline if this is a cry for help.





If not then go to the park and look at the sky,


or to a pet shop and pet a puppy


Or read some "Chicken Soup for the Soul"





And remember that the worst day of being alive is 10 times better than your best day being dead, and take a moment to reflect on what's really important or you will be needing that suicide hotline sooner than you think.





Your a flower and if you die you will just be thrown away, so live and be admired.
Reply:It was very good I can't believe your only 12, When I was 12 i was building forts and chasing girls around school, Just remember Life is short, Live Love Eat and be happy because No gets off this Planet Alive.
Reply:its perfect dont listen to these idiots