What do you think of my poem? Do u think its good enuff for publishing?

I have some other good ones but this is the best:





rain falling down





cold and hard





like the tears in my eyes





im holding in





my breath dances with a pitter patter





beat





as a chills sent through me





when raing hits my





feet











like the stars in the sky





it reflects off the ground





an image of me





in a puddle around





i realize who ive been





isnt who i want to be





and the one i love





isnt near me











as the water soaks through





down to my skin





i wonder how





we could of been











random like the rain





falling down





on and off





while the suns behind clouds











never easy to hold





or there to stay





our love always





washing away











is it okay to feel the pain





more than once





or should lighting only





hit one place once











should we stay apart





now





not to mix again





till we hit hard ground











loud, i hear voices





boom all around





if i love you





why and how











its unexplainable





to describe how i feel





like how something falls





out of nowhere











if rain can do it





then why cant i





lets go for it all





lets reach for the sky

What do you think of my poem? Do u think its good enuff for publishing?
I really liked it!! Its just speaks to anyone who has been in love and had their heart broken...


I don't know what others think, but I've enjoyed it and would like to see it published
Reply:Its awesome go get it published. It should get published right away, No Joke!!!!!!!!
Reply:its a very nice poem
Reply:don't quit your present job just yet.
Reply:I find it hard to read cause you put it so far apart...so NO....
Reply:mheh.
Reply:Honestly it sounds like an evanescence song. You can do better than this, try not to lock yourself into a rhyme scheme. It sounds like what you want to say would best be expressed in free prose. You should try and free yourself a bit, then post the results later.
Reply:It is GREAT!! Wish I could read your others!!
Reply:DEFFINITLY.


i love it.


great job :D
Reply:I'm no expert, but I think it's good. Next time go ask a friend, people can steal your work online if unpublished
Reply:I THINK ITS GREAT. GO FOR IT.
Reply:I don't know what anybody else has said but I do know that is a great poem and I believe it is worth publishing!
Reply:I like it :)





don't know if it is publishable or not. but that's just cause I don't know that sort of things.





:)





and thanks for your kind comment earlier :)
Reply:Quite honestly, this is a disaster that sounds trite and old.


This theme has been done too many times before, and the rhymes make it worse.


Several words are misspelled so please use a dictionary and thesaurus next time; finally, please keep trying!


Writing poetry is hard work, and it doesn't pay, but if you continue to ask for honest feedback you can only get better.


Here is a good website for submitting your works: http://www.poetry.com
Reply:For what I guess to be your age, this is good. In terms of publishing, keep dreaming and keep writing.