If you were my wife and I wrote this song for you, how would you react?

You can hear the song at:





"www.nullfactor.com/media/


realm_of_understanding.mp3"





Lyrics are:





Keep you safe and warm


Keep you free from harm


Keep you through hard time





Keep me at my worst


Keep me at my best


Keep me as I am





Two melt into one


Hate and death undone





Feel the coldness of your skin


Keep me warm within


It's all beyond the realm


Of understanding





Keep you from the rain


Keep you free from pain


Keep you part of me





Keep me through dark night


Keep me wrong or right


Keep me part of you





Two melt into one


Hate and death undone





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It was supposed to be a birthday present for her a few months ago, but the song didn't write itself that fast! :) I just need to run it past your ears before I play it for her.





Thanks!

If you were my wife and I wrote this song for you, how would you react?
I would love you.. more than I already do.


Its beautiful.. you're talented.. and if I was your wife.. I would be so proud/happy to be with you.
Reply:that's so sweet!!!!!!!
Reply:its nicce but the link doesnt work
Reply:I wasnt able to hear the song cause of some error(link couldnt work) but its a really good song. hope your wife loves it
Reply:i think that the fact you took the time to write a song for her would mean more than if you sounded great playing it or if the wording was perfect. its a very sweet and touching way to show your love for her and if it was me i would be moved to tears that someone would do something so special for me.
Reply:The links not working but the words are beautiful, love to hear the tune behind it.
Reply:could not hear the song, but what a romantic gesture. she surely should love it.. i would..


it is just the thought that you take all that time to do it for her that makes it full of love.


good 4 you!!
Reply:so sweet... your wife will love it....